POINT OF NO RETURN

Create, Pitch, Sell

Smoke On The Water

The gruesome discovery of a woman’s corpse in the small tourist resort of Point Jove, Missouri draws Sheriff Josh Wolfe, a widower who enjoys tinkering with his award winning hot rod, into the most perilous case of his career. Hounded by the townsfolk and media, Wolfe exhausts every conventional method for solving the crime. The investigation comes to a standstill. Then, four more residents disappear. Everyone is convinced Rhone County is harboring a serial kidnapper who chooses his victims by chance. Wolfe believes the people are not only related to one another but are somehow tied to the last surviving member of the county’s namesake. Time is not only running out for Sheriff Wolfe but for his lover, dissatisfied wife of a homebuilder, held against her will at the Rhone family's abandoned sawmill where spilled gasoline awaits a lighted match.

Excerpt from Chapter One—

It was her uncanny likeness to Adele, his adoptive sister, that made him stare at her. She sat to one side of a barstool with an arm propped on the padded edge, nice legs crossed beneath a short denim skirt. She sipped a margarita; checked out the Saturday night crowd in the intimate saloon setting. Smiled and waved at anyone she knew.

Jim took a seat at the end of the bar. He slid a pack of Morilos out of his shirt pocket. One by one, the single men honed in on her only to get shot down. He lit a cigarette to curb a satisfied smile. The slow moving couples on the dance floor reminded him of his brief stint as a deckhand on a cargo ship and the way the vessel rocked side to side on the rolling sea in advance of a storm. He loved it, even when he was almost swept overboard by a crashing wave.

When a barman with ERIC on his nametag approached, he ordered a shot of off-brand bourbon. A rock glass was plunked down in front of him. Jim paid for the drink with cash. He flicked ashes into an empty peanut bowl. Downed the cheap whiskey that displeased his palate.

Tilting a hat back on his head, he cast a furtive glance in her direction. The lights winked at her auburn hair when she tossed her head back to knock long strands from her shoulder. She looked at him, her eyes twinkling with carefree interest. Glossy red lips beckoned him with a playful smile.

He stood. An older man staggered toward her. Jim realized the effort to go unnoticed so he could keep coming back was about to end.

(C)2010 Sharon Austin All Rights Reserved

New Book Releases For November

HOLLYWOOD HILLS by Joseph Wambaugh
http://josephwambaugh.net/

HELL'S CORNER by David Baldacci
http://davidbaldacci.com/

THIRD DEGREE by Maggie Barbieri
http://maggiebarbieri.com/

FULL DARK, NO STARS by Stephen King
http://www.stephenking.com/index.html

MY NAME IS RED by Orhan Pamuk http://www.orhanpamuk.net/

MY READING LIFE by Pat Conroy http://www.patconroy.com/

DEAD MAN'S CHEST by Kerry Greenwood http://phrynefisher.com/books.html

MOONLIGHT MILE by Dennis Lehane http://www.dennislehanebooks.com/

EDGE: A Novel by Jeffery Deaver http://jefferydeaver.com/

PORT MORTUARY by Patricia Cornwell http://www.patriciacornwell.com/

SUNSET PARK by Paul Auster http://www.stuartpilkington.co.uk/paulauster/body.htm

CRIMINAL INNOCENCE by Jeffrey Ashford http://www.chessvalleybooks.co.uk/index.html

CRESENT DAWN by Clive Cussler & Dirk Cussler http://www.cusslermen.com/CrescentDawn.htm

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Point Jove Series Book Two

I have started the second draft of FIRE. This story will [eventually] be available on Amazon Kindle along with SMOKE ON THE WATER.

FIRE [working title]
A reporter furthers his budding career as a crime scene photographer by filming new construction being set ablaze by his older brother, who has a dark secret of his own.

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New Project Underway

I am adapting my novel, NOTCH, to a movie script.

Inspired by a true crime, this standalone mystery is set in Wichita, Kansas, and is told from 'Kevin's' point of view.

NOTCH [working title]
Blackmailed for murder, unable to prove his innocence, a man involves a county sheriff in his plan for revenge.

Excerpt—

"Now, tell me about the girl," said Sheriff Morgan.

God, here we go again. The words were at the back of Kevin's mind, but he was terrified to bring them forward. This is the part they'd all been waiting to hear. The part where they would decide exactly what his role in all of this had been. Like dogs in heat they all want a piece of me. His throat closed. He counted three dead flies on the narrow windowsill. A fourth lay on its back fitfully flailing its legs in some sort of macabre death dance.

Morgan leaned closer. "Talk to me, Kevin."

Kevin fixed his gaze on the drab gray wall farthest away from the door of the interrogation room. "She was lying on her left side...." There ain't no stoppin' us now, girlie, he recalled Jasper telling the redhead the night the three of them went to the abandoned meat packing plant to have a little fun. He scratched his forehead, hiding his expression. Or was it the blonde he'd said that to?

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Obviously, I can't show thoughts, so any scenes that do won't be in the script. The first draft of the novel is complete. I'm working on both projects at the same time.

And, so far, I'm having fun.

Cheers

More Interesting Screenwriting Blogs

The Thinking Writer
http://thinkingwriter.com/

Indelible Freckles
http://dfmamea.com/blog/

Mystery Man on Film
http://mysterymanonfilm.blogspot.com/

Scriptwriting in the UK
http://dannystack.blogspot.com/

Living the Romantic Comedy http://livingromcom.typepad.com/my_weblog/

Clarkblog http://clarkblog.typepad.com/clarkblog/

MovieBytes: Screenwriting Contests http://www.moviebytes.com/

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Smoke On The Water Now Available

It's official! SMOKE ON THE WATER has gone live on Amazon Kindle. [linked in right column]

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The gruesome discovery of a woman’s corpse in the small tourist resort of Point Jove, Missouri draws Sheriff Josh Wolfe, a widower who enjoys tinkering with his award winning hot rod, into the most perilous case of his career. Hounded by the townsfolk and media, Wolfe exhausts every conventional method for solving the crime. The investigation comes to a standstill. Then, four more residents disappear. Everyone is convinced Rhone County is harboring a serial kidnapper who chooses his victims by chance. Wolfe believes the people are not only related to one another but are somehow tied to the last surviving member of the county’s namesake. Time is not only running out for Sheriff Wolfe but for his lover, dissatisfied wife of a homebuilder, held against her will at the Rhone family's abandoned sawmill where spilled gasoline awaits a lighted match.

This standalone novel is the first in the Point Jove mystery series.

Copyright 2010 Sharon Austin All Rights Reserved

First Review For Serial Quiller

"The title caught my attention, it was a good match to the storyline. The pace was good and held my interest, along with nice suspenseful moments. I liked the ending, it worked well for the story." --driver

Driver, thank you for your nice review.

From: http://www.amazon.com/Serial-Quiller-ebook/dp/B0046H9Z4K/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&m=AG56TWVU5XWC2&s=digital-text&qid=1286891354&sr=1-1